Original Poetry - Love Series: Your Kiss (Short & Sweet)
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Original Poetry from Adan Lerma
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Artist's Comment: the impetus for this new one was simply thinking about those quick good-by kisses we give so quickly so freely when our "other" leaves us off at work, or is off to shop, or some such we assume will be a short separation before coming right back, and how, sometimes, the take-it-for-granted motion-moment hits a surprise spark reminder of why we do our quick good-by smooches :-)
this is the first poem i've ever felt bordered on being a haiku poem in the sense of it's shortness and to the point; evidently, from the little of i know of the haiku form, and my brief search of the term haiku, "bordering" may be as closes as i can claim
the poem was originally only the first 9 short lines, but, to better fit my intent, felt it needed the little closure lines plus the sub title "short & sweet"
thus my brush with haiku-ness was equally short and sweet, but as nicely memorable :-)
related: "modern day lover"
adan - january 19, 2008 - to "Your Kiss (Short & Sweet)"
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Posted by Adan Lerma on 1/19/2008 5:44:24 AM |
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